today i made a soup not proper soup that you drink soup thats pousenus we put some concers and some little red things in and fruit like apple two apples and one pear then we started chopping concers up and putting it in and me and brando made the tent and then we put the camafloge on then we hammerd the pegs in and then we went i n and it was rainingthen i mixed the soup then callum and darren went in the tent and then ethan and kurt and then we made a big fire then darren and brandon put the fire out and brandon and there was a lot of steam and i was in it it went in my eyes and i couldnt see where i was going then me and brandon carried the basket back to the shed and we hided behind the shed and nobody spotted us and callum and kurt hided in the shed and then we went inthats it
well done Leon very good but please don,t forget your full stops and capital letters. It sounds like you done an awful lot and I no the weather was bad that day.I hope you never drank the soup because I don't want you to get poisoned do I
ReplyDeletebut what a good day you must of had.
by brandon ball